CONTEST

Here is my first contest

The day started out good for sailing. Whoops I'm getting ahead of myself. My name is Joe and I sail for a living but here is the story of my tragic demise.All I saw that was trouble was the group of clouds on the-(there are two the's. i will point them out with this sign -) the- starboard side. a knot grew in my stomach. it was fear. I was floating there when all of a sudden a clap of thunder came and it started to pour. it was to much for my small boat and my boat started to sink. I tried to keep it afloat but it was all for not. it sank and i was still in the water. Then on my left i saw something that strikes fear in every sailor's heart. it was the dark, cold, triangle shaped fin of a SHARK. There must have been thousands and they were upon me in a mere five seconds. they circled me like a donut of pure evil. I picked up a piece of driftwood although I knew it wouldn't do much. One shark bit at the board taking my hands with it. I thought one thing before I was swallowed by the cruel sea. I HATE BURRITO'S

Wikimail me your answer. the deadline for the answers is 5/11/2010. Have fun
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Okay here is the second contest.good luck.

A man arrives in town on sunday. stays a week and then leaves on sunday.

Deadline for answers is 6/7/2010. wikimail me the answers please. this time DON'T COME UP TO ME AND TELL THE YOUR ANSWER. WIKIMAIL ME! CONTEST OVER. YES ALEACRES HAS WON THE CONTEST. here is her answer- If he rode in on sunday and stayed a week then he would leave on MONDAY not sunday.** thanks for playing check for my wikimail saying the contest is over to find when the new contest begins.
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